Review on The High Window
Review of In Spring We Turned to Water by Michael Dooley (Doire Press)
Review by Jessica Traynor
Poetry Ireland Review Issue 146, edited by Stephen Sexton
“Michael Dooley’s Farmgate Prize-winning (sic) debut, In Spring We Turned to Water, ushers us into a landscape in which myth, history, and the present day collide. These poems are shot through with a kind of magical realism, and like the best magical realism, they don’t shy away from the darker side of life; in these rural-set poems, much loved animals die (whether by accident or design), game birds are shot, and the speaker in the poems finds themself having to take on the role of unwilling killer, or witness to slaughter. It’s the emphatic quality of these poems that really allows us to feel the loss, such as in the striking opening poem, ‘Sweet Pea’, where a beloved horse is transformed at the moment of death:
I lean down to calm her,
wet bridle in my hands,
when her poll breaks out in flower,
the mane in olive pods.
Another striking horse poem, ‘Votive’, weaves a kind of pagan magic from an act of killing so visceral it seems to blast a hole through time and space, forcing the perpetrators (who have acted out of mercy) to confront their nature as killers: ‘the whiteness of a disbelieving eye / when baskets of his bowels fell picknicked/ / in our hands, marking us’. These poems exhort us to imagine the acts we’re capable of, alongside great love – not only as individuals, but as communities.
Whereas the other two collections concern themselves with seascapes and wetlands, Dooley’s is a riverine collection, gliding us through the farmlands of his upbringing. These rivers, more than simply providing water and nourishment, are also liminal spaces. In an atmospheric sequence of poems dispersed throughout the collection and prefaced with ‘River,…’, we are immersed in these ever-changing riverscapes where timelines bleed into one another:
On the far bank, Wild Sullivan’s sucklers turn away from me and go still.
They are watching a figure cross the field; something ill-defined,
a ghost or a hunted priest, the Marcach maybe. How they part and show
him to water like a man damned. - (‘River, at Dusk)
It would be easy to be lulled by the deftness of Dooley’s phrasemaking, and the musicality of the language, but there is a serious reckoning here with what it means to be alive that admits not only beauty, but the reality of violence, and the spectre of grief. These are intricate poems which animate their subjects with careful attention.”